七、短文改错(共10小题; 每小题0.5分,满分5分)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文

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  • Last summer vacation, I worked as a volunteer in a hospital, where I meet a little girl, Rosalyn,

    met

    who was near eight years old. She just had∧operation in her leg but had to stay in bed for some

    nearly an and

    time. I was amazing by her courage because she never cried even if she was suffered a great deal

    amazed或者把suffered改为suffering

    of pain. I once noticed her helping a little boy which parents couldn’t come to see him that day.

    whose

    She was sharing her sweets and toys for the boy and telling stories to calm him down. Soon she

    with he

    stopped crying. I wondered that if many grown-ups could be as kind as she was to others!

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