基本上我是按照你写的改,有些句子改掉了不过意思是一样的,再加了些扩充内容而已.
Along with rising living standards,online shopping has now become a trend as more and more people are fond of it.Through the Internet people can have many things done online nowadays.It is convenient to shop online as we just have to sit in front of the computer and wait for the goods to arrive.This technology helps us to save our time and energy as we can avoid traffic congestion since we do not need to go out just to purchase something we need.Sometimes,the things online are even cheaper than in the brick-and-motar stores.Though we can gain lots of benefits through online shopping,but still,there are disadvantages that need to be considered.Especially,we have to know that the quality of the products we purchase online is not assured.Thus,undoubtedly,we must be wise and cautious while making a decision.However,online shopping still offers us tons of advantages and allow us to get better bargain as we can easily compare the prices between the retailers online.In conclusion,we should be aware that the physical shopping might be replaced by online shopping completely in the future.
【From the point of my view,we can go shopping on the Internet appreciatory.】基于我不明白这句的意思我就没放进去了.看了不喜欢还是还有意思没表达对的我再改吧