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  • Hello!I am Shaney.I had many things to do this summer holiday.

    First of all,I did my homework.And it took me ten days to finish it.

    Second,I would help my mother to do some housework,such as washing clothes,cleaning the floor and watering flowers.But most of the days,I just stay at home and play computer games or watch TV.

    Little by little,I got bored,so my mother and I went to the "Xing Long "park and went boating in the lake.But it turns out that I just like stay at home and play computer games.

    I'm looking forward to going to school every day.