英语改错 这是一篇关于我自己的英语作文,我想有许多语法错误,或有一些表达不是通顺的句子,I'm a smallbird.

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  • I am a bird,to be exactly,I'm just an ostrich that has dreamed of flying above the mountains freely since childhood.

    I was born in a remote and peaceful mountain,my childhood was lonely because I was a shy bird.I grew up with other birds,around me were tall trees,high mountains,beautiful flowers and waterfalls pouring down off the hills.I've learned how to communicate with mountains,waterfalls,and the birds that were singing in the sky.The passionate emotion I had about them had become one of the most significant feelings of my childhood.

    I desire knowledge eagerly.I love books,especially those touching stories.I also desire an enduring friendship,eventhough I know it's quite difficult to change the fact that I'm a shy bird.I don't even know how to deal with a friendship,I can't express exactly what's in my mind.I've been trying hard to change my foibles.I learned to help others,so that I could talk with them frankly,I'm afraid of being misunderstood.I guess that's why I'm who I am.

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