John was driving home from the station【1.改by为in】his car yesterday evening【2.改while为when】he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers【3.改a为an】hour when another car came out of a side road and【4.改 hitting 为 hit】him.【5.改All为Both】John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms【6.改were为was】broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following【7.改John为John‘s】.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out【8.加上of】it.They ran to their cars and【9.改had pulled为pulled】John and the other man out.Then they telephoned a doctor and【10.改a为the】police.Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.
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John was driving home from the station in his car yesterday evening when he had an accident.He was driving along a train road at 50 kilometers an hour when another car came out of a side road and hit him.Both John and the other man were hurt.One of John‘s arms was broken and the other man had a bad cut on his head.Another car was following John‘s.It stopped quickly and a man and a woman got out of it.They ran to their cars and pulled John and the other man out.Then they telephoned a doctor and the police.Soon John and the other man were taken to hospital.