Question

求助帮忙看看小作文 剑桥 7 text1 的 第一次写 请专业人士给个分数 和 建议 修改等 跪谢·~

Answer 1

第一段的第一句话要修改：From the table below we can get the information that different country has different percentage of national consumer expenditure.

第二段的第一句话要改：First,as we seen consumers of Ireland and Turkey spend most of their money on food、drinks or tobacco.第二句把第二句中people前的the去掉.