At Life’s Crossroads Leaving high school, I had to choose a career path—medicine or business—before college started in three months, but I couldn’t decide
Both my uncles suggested(要加 that) I (要加 should) work for a month in a company followed by a month in a hospital before I could know what to do. It seemed like a good idea. Then near (要加to) the end of two months, I began thinking (要加back) (about 应改为 of) my two experiences. The bank had offered better working conditions. (and)The hospital was full of excitement, but the training was hard. It seemed that the choices of business was going to run out. The Last day of my work at the hospital, I was driving home when I saw a boy hit by a bus and lie(lied 过去式) in(要用 on) the road as the bus run(ran 过去式) away. Nobody stopped. I know(knew 过去式) if the boy stayed there, he would die very soon. So, without help, I lifted him into my car. The next day, I went to see him. His family were sitting around his bed. The doctor introduced me as “the person who saved the boy’s life”. Everyone got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. The mother held my hands to her face, repeating again and again, “See, you are an angel!” What a feeling this(是 that) was, to help save the life of another person! Immediately , I knew (要加 that's what) I wanted to do for the rest of my life. I went to college for my medical studies. We may spend a lot of time wondering about what path to take in our lives, but sometimes you don’t really have to worry about your big decisions. They are made for you by some quality(品质) in you—by what you’re willing to do when necessary.
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