There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is (It is held) on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month. Lanterns are made in the shape (shapes) of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many other things. On the eve of Lantern Festival, all the lanterns are hung up.(All the lanterns are hung up on the eve of Lantern Festival 建议:最好写出来挂在哪里, 例子:hung up on the wall) Many people like eating rice glue balls(glue是胶水, 不放在吃的方面, 所以改为 sticky rice balls)、watching the lion dance and guessing(trying to figure out) the riddles at(during) the Lantern Festival. Do you know the ‘guess the riddle’?(riddle已经是谜, 用guess显多余. 建议你改为: Do you know how to play the riddle game?) It’s a(an) interesting game. People write the riddles on the lanterns, and let others (others to) guess the answers. The rice glue balls(sticky rice balls) are traditional Chinese food. Do you like eating them? I thank(错字, think) them(语法错误, they) are very delicious.
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