Question

希望英语自我介绍,请高人指导有什么不恰当,不适合作为演讲的地方.

Answer 1

I'm so pleasure to be here and becomes a new schoolmate,are very pleased to stand here facing everyone to make a self - introduction,though.I am * *,feel is a shy boy,and ,I hope that we can become good friends each othert,I love playing computer games,interested students we can go to make exchanges in private exchanges.Of course I see ,playing more more computer games does harm to our body,therefore,I usually like sports for develoing a healthy body ,my favorite sport is soccer,golf and so on ,If possible ,we can comunicate our experience of soccer skills.Now I went to college where I wanted to host my dream,so ,I would work hard to make my dream true ,although I am not good enough,I will stride to become myself outstanding.