你要六年级水平的?那么——
My Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was very interesting.First,I finished my honework in two weeks.Then,I went to visit my grandmother with my parents.And I stayed in her home for seven days.After that,Iwent to the Yuexiu Park wih my frend Sally and Anna.They are my good frends.I had a good time in this summer.
不好意思,我不是知道你学了过去式没有.但是——这应该是一篇要用过去时写的文章,否则的话,那就是“制定暑假计划”.但你并没有这样提问,而且,9月份制定暑假计划实在是有点怪怪的.所以——我就按照我的理解,写了这篇比较“烂”的文章.其中可能还有些语法错误,但是,我猜想你也许成绩也不太好,不然你不会上来求助.所以,还是稍微犯点错比较好.不然会被怀疑.以后,还是认认真真听好课吧.总是这样也不行的.