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  • 第二句话,去掉it,并把on提至which前,逗号后面.Still前的那一句,把illness前的and改为逗号.Still那一句,把apple改为apples;把trees改为tree;去掉been;把like后到句号为止的一段话改为:dreams that can not come true or things that can never be done(注意come true不能以人作主语).Still后面一句,fall改为fallen.字数限制,后面的不能帮你改了