不舒服,中文味道太浓了
1, normal应该比common好,
不用需要修饰：i am a normal girl
如果一定要修饰：i am so normal 不用加girl
或者用such,感觉稍好一点.
i am such a normal girl
2,干吗用被动?have your company不是蛮好的嘛
the journey following my dream不对的,用to或者towards吧
journey to（wards） my dream
i have your company on the journey towards my dreams
放在一起
i am so normal but lucky to have your company on the journey to my dreams
i am such a normal girl, but so lucky to have your company on the journey towards my dreams