The article combined the collection of the related data and effective interviews,WHICH POINTS OUT the PROBLEMS of the VOLUNTEERS INVOLVED IN community voluntary service,community volunteer organization,social environment,fund and other issues.COMPARATIVELY,（c要大写＋逗号） this situation MAKES a classification and improved the RESTRICTIONS of community VOLUNTARY （形容词,不能使用名词） SERVICES from external social environment according to related facts.THE ARTICLE also GIVES the solutions to several controversial subjects,including how to develop and broaden community VOLUNTARY SERVICES AS WELL.
有语法错误的地方我用大写字母写出来了,