Question

求高人帮忙改改英语演讲稿My Alien FriendWhen I got this topic . My first

Answer 1

my first reaction应该改为 my first thought 看了你下文 you 应该改为a friend

后面几句应该读改为过去式。when i was watching..i also hoped to... but it was true.

还有i thingk it's改为I thought it was he had big.... he ...