帮忙润色一下这篇英语演讲稿,使它更口语化,更幽默

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  • Let me show you a photo album,which records the footprint of my life.It means a lot to me.

    This is my mother who looks like carved out from the same mold with me.My friends who have read it all surprised at that,it is a photo when she was young .Now,she is crszy about Korean dramas ,she can be watching it a whole day even forget to cook.These are some of my travelling photos,this is me and my girlfriends to imitate the shape of the Titanic in Pearl River,Guangzhou,also,she is my best friend,we struggle together in the entrance examination period.

    This alhe bum is full of my memory ,one of the most precious things to me.I will treasure it all the time.

    写相册的话妈妈的那部分可以少些一点,在加一些其他亲人的照片描述一下,就是语法错误有点多