My happy day
Today is Sunday.The sun is shining.When it was eight o'clock a.m.,I went out for a breakfast.Then,I went to a park with my brother.We had a happy time here.In the afternoon,I played computer games.As usual,I did my homework carefully at four o'clock.My father usually read newspapers,but this afternoon,he went to the supermarket and he said,he would buy a toy for me.When six o'clock,my mother cooked a delicious supper for us.
I had a very happy day.Then,I'll have a good rest.
因为你说要求是初一的词汇,所以在词汇和语法方面我都做了控制.60多字的要求也达到了.除非一个初一的孩子水平很高,那我完全可以给他写一个更好的.题目要求是A happy day during my holiday.是要求写一天的内容而不是整个假期怎么过.所以将一天内的活动加以叙述就可以了.记述一天的活动,那么我想这个作文选题就是要考一般过去时,考察学生对此时态掌握的熟练程度.所以将一天内的活动其动词全部用过去时态,相应的人称变化注意到,加以叙述就可以了.是我自己写的,不是从某些网站上粘贴过来,不想某些人连问题怎么问都没看清楚.
希望对你有所帮助.