Dear John,
I am writing a letter to you to tell you something about my trip to the Summer Palace last year.
We had two months’ holiday last summer,.In August,we invited Mr Wu with us to take part in the school trip to the Summer Palace.At 8:00 am,we met at the school gate .Because of many cars on the road, it took us two hours to get there by bus. Mr Wu told jokes in the bus for us. He was so humorous that we didn’t feel bored.The Summer Palace is one of the most beautiful scenic spots.We went boating in the river,we helped each other and enjoyed ourselves very much.At 4:00 pm,we returned school. I uploaded the pictures to my homepage after I came home.You can go ane see them.
Love,
Amy
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