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  • Dont you want a person who is as tall as giraff?Dont you want a person who can let you see even if you are in the back line of the seats?I would like to recomend a person who is omnipotent name Kevin Son.

    First,let me introduce him.Just as I said,his name is Kevin Son,his birthplace is manchaster and his birthday is July 18th 1985.He is still young but he doesnt have hairs because he works so hard.His school taht he was lastly attended is a Beijing shcool he said that it is something like YewWah,and he love it.His worst habit is biting finger nails,he works so so so hard that he is getting rid of stress by biting his finger nails.His favorite band is Beastie Boys and he likes the combinaton of rock and rap.And whenever he is tired he does the chinese massage.And finally what annoys him is his another habit,not always finishing what he started.

    Second,let me tell you what did he answered of my question.He said today kids need to think bigger not just about themselves,from this you can see he is a big thinker,And he said adults today really need to show the kids how to live life.And make students love to learn,from this we can see that he is a very responsible person.After that I asked him where else in the world would you go?He said that he wants to go to America,in onehand he could experience another civilization but in the another hand he is afraid of the perople with guns in America.And before the jo bteacher,he wanted to be a writer,a traveling children`s writer,and also now,he think he will be successful.

    Like you see,he is a hard worker,if you buy him,you wont be disappointed,he will do all kind of back breaking work for you,believe me,no Kevin Son no successful.