Dear Sir or Madmam ,I'm writing to apply for the job you post online on May 17th.I'm Li Hua from China,now I'm studying in a high school near Green Street.I have been l ooking for a part-time job to make some money and keep myself busy after school.I think I'm the very person who suits the job.Firstly,I have much experinence in helping move the furniture and doing repairs.Secondly,I'm good at the computer.Thirdly,I'm a good driver as well.I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
英语短文改错、有十个错、会加分的啦、你要多少分都行、呃、我给得起求大神帮助