Question

Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is common one among middle school

Answer 1

Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is (加上a) common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices(改为advice) can help you.First in (改为of)all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it (去掉it) is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud (改为louder)about your wish to make friends than any words.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him(them).Next,trying(改为try) taking with a student who is as shy as you or who share(改为shares) the same interest with you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless (改为If)anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly(改为possible).保证完全正确.你原文的第五行的take应该打为talk（trying taking这个位置.)就不改了你知道就可以了.