第一篇：
1、nowadays注意首字母大写,其余也是；
2、take a look around放在with the increasing number of studying abroad 前面；
3、aren’t there any friends of your’s doing it ?（不用整的的这么复杂）改为are there any your friends doing that?any在疑问句中就有否定的意思.
4、get know中间加to,或者把get去掉
5、 foreign face to face 改为foreigners……
6、spoken skill改为skills for speaking
7、since foreigns are so friendly moreover can expand our horizon from the other country .foreigns改为foreigners；can前加and
第二篇
1、we can’t deny the convenience it brought us . it改为that
2、TVs把s去掉
3、It’s hard to image a man can’t do thing without them even for one day. can’t do thing 改为can do anything,因为without已经是否定的
4、what ‘s new 改为the news
5、 at their door 改为doors
6、plenty 加of
7、more and more kids becoming addicted becoming 改为become或者are becoming
8、spending 改为and spend
9、 How awful is it改为How awful it is
10、limit改为limitation