关于英语文章纠错After reading , I have a deep feeling. The Robinson

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  • After reading ,I have a deep feeling.Robinson likeD sailing and adventure VERY MUCH.He did not IGNORE his father’s advice and CHOSE TO go to sea.During his sailing to Africa,He met a big storm and the ship HIT A ROCK触礁.All the sailorS WERE dead,The Robinson WAS the only people survived the big storm.He was sent by waves to AN island ALONE.This island did not HAVE any people and Robinson COULD only hear birDS singing and SEE goats GOING AROUND.He found a place to set up a tent near the water source ,WHICH COULD stop attackS form wild animals.In this island,Robinson met many difficultIES and setbacks,such as diseaseS、lonelINESS,even stormS and earthquakeS.But ALL OF THESE WERE OVERCOME by Robinson.He domesticated the goats and parrotS,BRED a dog and two cats,planted barley and rice and saved the Prisoner from the cannibals.The Robinson called THE prisoner Friday,He became HIS best friend .In thIS way,the Robinson lived in this island for 28 years,FINALLY he rectunED to England.

    At the road of life,there was full of difficultIES and setbacks and there WERE only two choices one WAS movING faward,the other one WAS GOING back.Robinson CHOSE former,SO he created a miracle,he OVERCAME THE difficultIES WITH his will and wisdom.So,I will learn from Robinson.In the studying、living and working,I will like Robinson,did not give up any chance,never stop in the road of life,eliminate any difficultIES WITH my will and wisdom.

    顺便翻译“触礁”

    多谢!