Last summer holiday, I and my friends went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is big and beautiful. We visited many places.Than we bought a lot of things and three bags of chips, Tony bought two pairs of socks, Peter bought ten candies. We also eat a lot of delicious food. We have a great time!
我看了一下他们的,加以修改就对了,还加了一些词,变通顺了,你看看吧!~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……