某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening)烹饪(cooking) 防身术(self-defen

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  • Dear leader,

    I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses, such as gardening, cooking, self-defence, nursing and so on.

    I’d like to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers and grasses since I was a child. I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy

    the beauty of nature.

    For one thing,I hope to gain more knowledge of gardening ,which can help me to major in the gardening after attending college. Besides, I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure plants more, and also , I wish to get more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university. For another, after graduation from college,I will devote my life to cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state ,which will attract more foreigners to visit .

    Looking forward to your early reply.

    Yours ,

    Wang hua

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