小题1: job
小题2: 去掉been
小题3: a
小题4: experience
小题5: received
小题6: 去掉was
小题7: my
小题8: √
小题9: read
小题10: really
小题1: job he got a good work in a bike factory.其中work不可数， 应改成可数job.
小题2: 去掉been But after he had been worked there for some years for +一段时间 ， 用完成时。而had been worked 是被动，应给为主动。去掉been
小题3: a he decided to have change,change为名词，应写have a change
小题4: experience saying what experiences he had "他有什么样的经验" 当“经验”时不可数。 应改成experience
小题5: received One of the answers he accepted accept "接受"receive "收到"这儿的翻译应为收到。所以改为 received
小题6: 去掉was from a man was looking for a job, too. looking for a job 做后置定语修饰a job, 所以去掉was
小题7: my be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss翻译为“把我的姓名和地址给你现在的老板”所以改成my
小题8: √
小题9: read After he reads the letter, 应用过去式。时态一致。所以改成read
小题10: really what he had done was real foolish.修饰形容词foolish 用副词really.