which team do you like best改：which team is your favorite?
basketball technology 改为:basketball skills
People called him king!call不用加ed
I like play basketball too 改为I also like playing basketball 或者I also like to play basketball.
I also like to play basketball and I hope I can become a good basketball player like him one day .
中间加个and来衔接．
OK．
其他都没问题．