Good afternoon, (dear Madam and Sir). I’m very glad to have this honor to take this interview.
My name is XXX, 22 years old this year. I come from Sun yat-sen’s hometown Zhongshan City, (where the father of modern China was born).
My undergraduate period is coming to an end) in Sichuan University, where I major in management science.
(When I was a freshman,) I (used to start) an (business undertaking in my spare time) in the first semester and the result is not bad, (and therefore, affording to take chances), I (risked to) speculate in the stock market in the second semester, (and unfortunately), the result is terrible. After that, (I found that) the trace of my money (becomes) my interest (to) run through my college life.
(As a sophomore), I (taught myself Japanese) and (passed) the JLPT (The Japanese-Language Proficiency Test) Level 1 with 121 point, (which) is the most difficult (one of it ). (As a result), I (was able to use) Japanese in the preliminary test instead of English.
(I succeeded in ushering my junior). After joining the GMC (Global Management Challenge) competition in the firstsemester, I (participated in) the CFA (Chartered Financial Analyst) level 1 test for the reason of learning finance systematically and (passed it) in June last year. After that, I (have realized) that I'm too young (and) too naive, I must take part in the postgraduate entrance (examination) so that I can have a deeper understanding of finance.
(Now, my college senior is about to end). I (plan to) spend half a year (preparing) the entrance test while writing my Graduation thesis on Financial Risk Model in the last semester.
That’s all, Thank you for giving me such avaluable opportunity!
【附注】
1、dear teachers 属于中式英语,礼貌场合最好用 dear Madam and Sir
2、大学x年级最好分别用 freshman,sophomore, junior, senior
3、讲述的基本都是大学各年级的事情,应该用过去时表示.
4、其他修改之处都放在括号里面.