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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you because I am interested in the accommodation you have offered to someone who will help with your two children.I am a twenty-one-year-old boy and I come from China.I have been learning English for several years and apart from it, I can also speak two other languages fluently which are Spanish and French.I once worked in a kindergarten for one year, so I know how to take good care of children..
I am enquiring about the time needed and when to start.Moreover you have mentioned languages, but I do not know what languages are requested.I would like to know what kind of experience you require for your children, teaching or caring for children.Lastly, I want to know what kind of accommodation it is and how it is like.If I am the right person, please let me know.Hope to receive your letter soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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