1.make sb sth 使.成为.
2.linad .我猜是Linda,人名吧.
3.slim and delicate looking but tough and firm inside 外表柔弱,内心坚强
4.你有些空格没打出来吧,had abackground of diverse illnesses 应该是 have a background 吧
5.有些没断句吧..My husband later that when she walked merrily off the plane on cheristmas day in 1994 with her round ,worried looking chinese bady bundled in red and holding atoy bear he had aweird impression that we would eventually raise this child 这句,我个人感觉是有些缺了或者顺序错了之类的,但是大意应该是“我的丈夫在看到我的朋友Linda有一个小孩的时候,感到很奇怪”吧.
6.three years my best friend died 应该是three years later吧
6.iwas 55,afulltime textbook editor whith two almost grown daughters应该是 I was 55,a full-time textbook editor with two almost grown daughters（两个已渐成人的女儿）
7.my huaband 应该是my husband 吧
8.iwas loking forward to a few years of empty nesting and then some grendchildren 应该是I was looking forward to 这句应该是少了点什么吧.不过look forward to doing sth 期望做某事
9.Starting over with a dunamic kingergartner was,to be frank ,not my expectation.这一句：start over with sth 重新开始.,后面应是dynamic吧,“有活力的” to be frank 老实说,常用短语
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