Vae bump you as I live
last year,I heard about a singer on internet named Vae.I have ever listened a song called "Rouses' funeral"in the street .I did not know it's from his hands.And now(最好改成since then) I really admire(最好用adore) him .I began to listen to his songs such as "moth" "whatever but nothing" and so on .Every song I like very much .Every song from him could touch my true emotion & mood string.Vae is a handsome boy ,But compared with it ,smart mind,elegant moving art-hue pen-orientation is more attracting & favorable.文笔优美 感人有时让人欢喜.
喜欢他的rap .喜欢他自嘲的谦虚 ,喜欢他的幽默,喜欢他会弹钢琴 ,喜欢他会弹吉他 ,喜欢他漂亮工整的字.As his rap,his self-kidding modesty,his humor,his gift of playing the piano & guitar,and also favor his delicate handwritings.
他文静 稳重 大度 是不是可爱到让人想捏捏 I thought that every his fans must 永远支持他!
Moreover(表示连接)his serenity honest & generosity is lovely enough to squeeze him which making all his fans suppoting him for their lives.
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