有点中文式英语哈~我帮你改一下吧
My Plan for Winter Vacation
Now winter vacation is coming.Let me elaborate on my winter vacation plan. Above all, I will doing the things that I want to learn during this winter vacation. and then I will review the knowledge I have learned.In all subjects,I am poor at maths. so I decide to preview the maths and do more maths Practice. What’s more,I like reading books .Especially nice books, English books and Chinese books
however,Health is very important for us.So I’m going to keep healthy though running, do exercises. And I will drink enough water, drink less soda.
I will do it according this plan.and I will never give up.
that’s all.thankyou.
恩,这个是我按照上面你的意思重新写了一篇.请指教哈~~