Once upon a time,there was a fat girl,called Lily.And she was so fat that every day some peole would come up to play jokes on her,saying"You are really a lovely pig!"so she decided to (cut down )the food of every meal to lose weight.However,on (account) of lack of nutrition,she became weaker and weaker.
Finally,she broke down and was sent to a local hospital.Fortunately,not for a long time ,she woke up ,seeing all her faimilies( staring at )her,worried.At sight of this( scene) ,she realized that health was the most important thing and however fat she was,her parents would love her forever,who( brought her up).
THAT IS ALL.WHAT DO YOU THING OF IT?