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Dalian, a city by (加入the) sea, is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe. It is easy to go (there) by train; (besides), you can take a bus or plane as well. Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip (去掉in) last month. We visited many interesting (places), having lots of fun. Dalian is (so) beautiful a city (that) even many foreigners go and work there. I met some foreigners there and (talked) with them. Most of them said they enjoyed (their) stay in Dalian. After staying there for ten days, we returned home, tired (but) happy.