帮我看下这短篇文章有没有病句啊?有的话请帮我修改一下!

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  • Good afternoon,professors!Please allow me to introduce myself.

    My name is **.I live in yz,a very beautiful old city.I graduated 4 years ago.My major was horticulture.While in school,I spent most of my time on studying.I passed CET4,and acquired basic knowledge of my major.

    Now,I’m a landscape gardener working in Slender West Lake.My main job is to maintain and create bonsais.I work very hard because this is the job I am so interested in.I always try my best to finish my tasks,no matter how difficult they are.And I still want to keep on learning new things to increase my abilities and broaden my horizons.

    Now here is my thesis presentation.The topic of my paper is Translation on Titles of English Films

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