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Life
Nowadays,our life is coming up in conversation.(似乎没有comversation这个词,只听过conversation）
Some people say that life is very important in our life.
Actually most of people are interesting in life,because it can decide our futher,furthermore,because of it,we have a feeling of satisfiction.When I was young,my mother always adviced me that life is important.She said “life have only one chance,you have to make the most of an opportunity,I just worry about you,you shouldn’t forget it!” .Because I had a beautiful and smart mother,I grow up with good advice.
Now my life is successed by advice.I am very happy for that.