1.His name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy.
当涉及和能量问题是他的名字总是被提及.
was come up 改为 came up
这里无需被动,come up表示提及,“主动用,被动翻”.
如：The project came up in their conversation.
这项工程在他们在谈话中被提到.
2.As many as 62500 people died as result of the earthquake.
地震的结果导致62500个人丧生了.
as result of 改为 as a result of
这是固定词组.
3.She felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her self-control.
她情不自禁地想对他咆哮,但是他决定不要失去自控.
feel like to yell 改为 feel like yelling
feel like doing表示情不自禁想要做某事,也是固定搭配.
4.There's no doubt whether one day he will succeed.
毫无疑问他有一天他会成功的.
whether 改为 that
there is no doubt/wonder+that+从句,这是表示毫无疑问的固定句型.
5.I made her to pomise not to tell anyone,and she said she would keep my secret.
我让她保证不会告诉任何人,并且她说她会保密的.
to promise 改为 promise
make sb do sth.