I have been to played the flute for four years.I am not sure what me made do so,maybe is because my dad and his musical talent.When my dad was a little boy ,he was pushed with my grandparents ,to play the piano.He was really a good player before eight years of practice.And now,he pushes my brother and myself to play some instruments.The flute needs a lot of practice.When i play a piece well,i feel very excited.Even though my mind is controlling my finger,i feel that i am listening to other person playing in a different room.i realize that is i love music.i will keep playing the flute through good or bad times.
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