不知道你的年纪如何
语言有些平淡,比如说我感到很无聊,太直白了,可以改成每年过节方式的前篇一律不免令我有些心生厌倦,
开头第一段就是好几个短句子.就是说 一句话长一点,有个逗号,适当添加连接词,不然会给人短促,前后无关联的感觉.
请采纳.
帮我修改下作文The drawing vividly demonstrates that a man lying on
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