跪求批改TOEFL独立写作!我第一次 很迷茫!

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  • 1、Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research

    while others think they should spend more time educating students.

    此句型用的太过频繁,建议改为sb.suppose +从句或sb.claim +从句或sb.agree +从句或第一人称时替换为As far as I am concerned.

    2、What is your view?中式英语

    3、Recently,a controversy about whether university professor should spend more time

    doing research rather than educating students was aroused in our society.中式英语

    4、Some people claim that ,as an expert in a certain field,university professors are

    obligated to devote themselves to research work ,while for me spending

    more time on educating students is a optimal choice for university professors.中式英语

    还有下面些也有中式英语之嫌:

    In the first place,there is no doubt that,serving as a teacher ,the prime task is to cultivate students rather than doing research ,which makes difference between a professor and a specific researcher.

    People have distinctive occupation have their own duty to fulfill,and only everyone work their tail off to accomplish that will prosper our society.

    Apparently,the result of failing to fulfill obligation will follow if university professors spend more time doing research.

    Moreover,doing researches will inevitably take long time,especially in society nowadays where knowledge accumulates by multiplying,thus it is bond to distract professors from their main teaching work and have a degrading effect on the growth of students.