紧急勘误!we had send our new purchase orders CEN0703 and CEN0704

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  • 基本同意"回答者:a2824815 - 试用期 一级"这位朋友的翻译,稍作调整和解释如下:

    第一句话纯粹是在描述一个过去发生的一个事实,就是你发出了订单,一般过去时就OK啦,不要用完成时态.

    第二句中receipted应换成received,这一点是肯定的.

    最后一句,发货事件常用的表达应该是shipping date,CEN0703前面的the也要去掉,这样的表达就显得非常的流畅、地道.

    We sent our new purchasing orders CEN0703 and CEN0704 on 7 June 2007 to you and we have received the equipment of CEN0704 on 10 July 2007.So may I konw the shiping date of CEN0703?