呃……首先这文章是想表现考试之后的失落和对明天的期望么?如果是这样的话首先第一句话与文章内容的关联没有啊,不知道第一句问什么要写,也没有解释.直接从.If I could go back in time ,I could have down more meaningful things.But time can't be reversed.开始就好了.而且,如果你要说以后振作的话.But it is not easy to make up my mind to study hard.As a matter of fact,I often say to my self,"I swears to."but I instantly go back on my words.这句就没有必要了,难道你想表现人在困难面前要振作却很难,这样又和最后一句不符合了,以上是主题上的问题.
至于句子,首先有很多单词拼写问题,是打错的么.第一句写的很诡异.第二段.I have known that there must be someone better than you.时态用的有问题,应该一般时态,即使想要表达某种语气可以用did know,而且最后是me吧.Diamond cut diamond,来得太突然了.go back on my words.不通.第三段,talent是某种个人属性,不是说没就没的,不是主观的,而且很少有人说自己有talent.三段最后一句,these challenges是啥?
倒数第二段,你的belief是啥?
嗯,就这么多吧……