加油站——gas station;
注意安全驾驶——Drive safe即可,楼主的比较生硬
slacks——常用复数,these slacks;
不熟悉——I am not familiar with XXX, 是用be动词,不用do;
对XX在XX方面要求严格——be strict with somebody in something,require和at用得不对;
跑步Jogging,这里是做主语,不小心犯低级错误了8;
火鸡那句:我觉得traditional改为a tradition,或者整句改为Traditionally,the Europeans have turkey on Christmas day 为好
以上均为一己之见,楼主酌情参考!