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  • Some famous university campuses ARE becoming travel hot VIEW spots, more and more VISITORS want to GO there .For example, Peking university and Wuhan university .

    But, should the university campuses be open to tourists? People have different opinions on this problem.

    On the one hand, some PEOPLE think the campus should be open to tourists. Because BY that THEY can EARN more money for the university , and some university campuses scenerIES really very beautiful, even is a symbol of the city, BEIJING UNIVERSITY IS AN EXAMPLE.

    On the other hand, the campus is A place for studyING INSTEAD OF travelLING.

    The beautiful scenerIES make studentS have good mood to study.

    If many tourists go to there, they will disturb students.

    ALTHOUGH travelLING IS A attractIVE business IT makeS noiseS.

    In my opinion, some famous university campuses really very beautiful , it should be shared by many people.

    Of course , if can limit the amount of tourists, don’t effect ON students'S DAILY LIFE ,that’s BE better .