Jack has droved his old car leave the home,he first send his daughter to school,then is his wife to hospital,his wife is a beautiful nurse.
About nine of clock,he has posted two bags to his parents at post office.
In the last,he go to the book store after he parking his old car,he want buy some books for his daughter.
简单的小短文,用词简单,时态单一,描述清晰.
主人公一早所有行进路线很清晰,间或有部分解释——his wife is a beautiful nurse,字面意思是夸他太太漂亮,实际是告诉你的读者,他的太太不是因为生病去医院的.
也请各位高人看到有错误的地方指出来,互相学习了.