小改一下,有一些不是英语的习惯,我就 按行来说吧.
1,2行没问题,
3,As he grows up,he becomes naughtier.
4,wactching cartoon,it will strain their eyes if they spend too much time on it.
5,makes the toys everywhere
6 teach him not to do this and that.
7 I often
8 I donot remember how many times I have said it.
9 One day,I said it again when he was acting up
10,But I didnot expect that he should shout at me that "It is unfair"
11,I was too speechless to say a word.
最后说一句,不知道为什么,亲的英文读起来不顺.建议多读点英文读物