六级作文就一段 请各位大侠看看有什么语法上的问题伐?

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  • 理了一下,你看看可要顺一些.

    It sounds strange that most graduates in China tend to live with their parents after graduation.However,behind the phenomenon lie a variety of reasons.First,graduates can't afford to have or rent an apartment for them to live in,with so little a wage compared to the high housing price.Second,they are too busy to have enough time to prepare meals themselves,and they are suffering from the great stress at work.Third,their parents are always ready to help them and supply a sense of comfort and safety.