My hobby
Everyone has our own hobbies,it may give us a lot of happiness.For example,build model ships,play basketball,raise pets and so on.Then what’s my hobby?My hobby is listening to music.
When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music. Though I’m not good at it,I often lose myself in it.When I am in trouble,music can make me calm down.When I am very tired,it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something,it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.
Do you like listening to musici?If not,I hope you can have a try,you’ll find it so good.
试题分析:本文以听音乐为自己的爱好,介绍听音乐的好处。能够清楚地表述自己的观点和想法,写作时应注意要用正确的格式去写,会用一些短语,用一般现在时,以第一人称来叙述。
【亮点说明】短文用了排比句,为文章增色不少,如:When I am in trouble,music can make me calm down.When I am very tired,it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something,it also can make me happy again.考点: