有下面两个问题.都比较严重.
1 既然是讲white lie 那么第四段就有些不对题意,建议删去改成与文章主题相关的.
2 第23段为具体论证,应该举出有说服力的实证例子,可以举自己的,可以是有名的历史事件,你的虽说也举例了,可是很笼统不具体,难得高分.
还有问题可以问我
托福作文求评分,指教!there are times when lying is acceptable.There is
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