这个作文我上月写过的~不过不知道你想要个什么层次的~比如初中?高中?4 6级?字数要多少啊?
你把问题说清楚点嘛!
是不是英语老师布置的寒假作业嘛?
If I have a lot of money,I want to go around the world with parents.
Seeing the most beatutiful interesting,such as the Great Wall,Pyramids,Eiffel Tower.Also,I will buy a sports car to my father and give my mother many fashion clothes.Besides,I'd like to donate much money to the charities to help some people who suffer from disease,poor and hungry.
嘿嘿 66个字 ,你自己适当调整下就可以了.总共3点,里面有条件状语从句,非谓语动词,定语从句,还有一些短语,单词,连接词.应该来说是按照了要求写的啦~
不过要说这些作文挺好写的,抓住一个重点,比如说这个命题,,肯定不能少了父母!否则内容感觉不从实.想想父母养你这么大了,你有钱了却把他们忘了!愤怒!
回答的这么好,不容易啊,很少有人正儿八经的写作文的,LZ是不是该考虑追加点分啊?10分 20分都行,It's up to you.
I was hoped I can help you.(超级委婉!）