I have (a) good friend whose name is Tom .She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class .Although she is clever ,but（去掉这里的but 或者前面的although） she works very hard（ly去掉） .We have a lot in common and have a lot to talk about(去掉about） .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents （were） out .She was doing her homework（s去掉 作业不可数） one Sunday morning when she smelt something burned（换成ed） .She stopped （to）look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke com（ing ing替换成e 也就是come） out of her neighbor 's house .She called 119immediate .Ten minutes late ,the firemen came and put out (这边要加the) fire .Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.
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